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The Swimmers


By Driss R. Temsamani
 
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The story begins in Rincon a small village between Tetuan and Sebta in north Morocco. Saad is a 13-year-old boy, son of a fisherman and a humble mother who sells vegetables in the local market. Saad was always a bright kid, full of energy and ambition. He started going to school at the age of seven and always did well.

 

By the age of 17th Saad had learned the facts. I am not talking about Physics, Math, Tarbia Islamia and Felsafa kind of facts; No, I am talking about reality and life in the land of no opportunity. Saad learned that the salary of a waiter in Spain is 4 times more than that of a 4-year degree graduate from Tetuan, who makes 4 times les than a Diwani who watches the Moroccan border with Spain.

 

One evening while getting ready to go to sleep, Saad thought to him self, "If I study for 4 years and then work for another 4, I will never make as much money as the waiter in Spain, will not be able to marry the women of my dreams, who for sure will marry Diwani. After all, who want to be with a poor boy from Rincon. So why not drop from school and migrate to Spain. After all many Moroccans have done it and they sure drive some very nice cars when they come to morocco in the summer.".

 

The next day, Saad skipped school and went to hangout at Castillejos, a small village near Sebta where unemployed young Moroccans gather to talk about how to migrate to Europe. Castillejos was a colorful little village indeed that complemented Saad’s higher education.

 

One day while Saad was bonding with some hopeless kids, he learned about a job that paid more per day than what his father made in a week. All he had to do was swim. "What a deal, I will work for few months, pay for my crossing to Spain and start making some good money." Saad thought to him self. This was his big break. Saad decided to give the job a shot.

 

Not wasting any precious time, Saad asked his bodies to take him to Hmida the boss, 50-year-old men from Ktama known as the Contrabando Lord of Sebta. Hmida gave Saad the job description; "A weldi, first you go up the hill and cross the border to Sebta. There you will meet with Rebah, my right hand

 

men, who will give you the merchandise. You will then rope your self to the merchandize and swim your way back to Castillejos. Once you deliver the goods, you go back again to the hills and do the same run, Ah and what ever you do, avoid the Spanish border patrol. If you are caught, remember; I do not know you. That is all. Yallah hzem rasek o kon rajel. I will pay you 1 dollar for every trip you make."

 

That night Saad had dinner with his mother and father and never felt so proud of him self. He wanted to tell about his new job and brag about all the money he was going to make. However, he wanted to prove him self first, work for few months, make some good money and then tell his family all about his new plans for the future. Saad woke up early the next morning and got ready for his first job. He said goodbye to his mother and run to the buss.

 

Final stop Castillejos. Saad rushed up the small town’s hill. His hart was beating very fast, a mixture of fear and exhaustion. An hour later, he was in Sebta. So far, the job seamed easy. After all, the Spanish border patrol was on the take and did not care too much for these minor contraband runners.

 

In Sebta, he met Rebah; "Are you Saad the new kid?" Said Rebah". Yes, I am ready", replied Saad. "Ok, take this Fridge to Hmida and make sure not to loose it in the ocean. You don’t want to piss-off el maalem on your first job," shouted Hmida.

 

The fridge was 2 times the height of Saad and quite heavy but he managed to drag the big box of metal to the shore. The waves were pounding the beach and it looked like it was going to storm. Saad took a long rope and rapped it around the fridge. He then grabbed the fridge from and pushed it in the ocean while raping part of the rope on his small body.

 

Saad started his journey toward the border while dreaming of the bright future waiting for him. "A car, a house, a wife maybe a big business in Castillejos, Ah; one day all my dreams will come true" sighted Saad.

 

Suddenly, Saad felt a pain in his leg. He tried to ignore the cramp and continue swimming, but the pain was getting intense. He stopped swimming for a moment to ease the pain but the fridge started to take- on water. The situation was getting bad, Saad legs were frozen and he had hard time swimming. He was struggling to keep afloat and then suddenly out of nowhere a huge wave struck him and took him under the water with the fridge rapped around his body. Saad took a deep breath and gave-up to the mighty sea.

 

A sharp silence, images of a kid playing on his father’s lap, a baby pressed against his mother’s chest. Saad looked up while slowly sinking toward the bottom of the ocean. A warm tear ejected out of frozen eyes and bubbled with his last glance at the shining sun above. Saad blinked for the last time while letting out his final breath.

 

Although the story of Saad may sound like a drama, it is a reality for many Moroccan families today. Desperation, hunger, greed, bad influence, lack of opportunity to name few of reasons that push many young Moroccans to perish in vane. However, that is not the issues! We must recognize the dilemma of those we call Harraga and become sensitive to the fact that many of our people are dying every day trying to cross to Europe. Some make it and some drown before they set foot on the miss-promises land

 

To the swimmers that are laying in the bottom of the ocean between morocco and Spain. To those that are not remembered because we are a shame to do so, today we pray for you and may Allah bless your souls.

 

 driss_r_temsamani@msn.com







 
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ezreach1 : Driss,

Thank you for thinking of all the forgotten and thank you for your nice dedication to them. May Allah bless their souls and may their families be granted an everlasting patience.

Khalid
 
suma76 : as a tanjawiya myself, I know that what you talk about is not far from reality. I enjoyed reading your story because instead of just writing an essay on this problem, you made it more real by turning into a believable story.
sumaya
 
nadine_d : Nadine:
very good article Driss.
I think the safety of Moroccan children should be insured. In one minute everything that we love and cherish can be snatched away in we don’t try hard enough! Tragedies on the ocean reveal what happens at the heart of a Moroccan family when it is forced to the most devastating tragedy. We are watching our communities transform into something we don’t like, don’t want and should not endure. One biggest responsibility to our future generations of Morocco is to protect our country and community so that we can hand it over to them in a good shape!
 
myounsi : ElyounsiY

Thank you Driss for the beautiful, yet extremely sad story!
Here is a smart and bright kid who just started his life
simply vanished under the weaves of stupid poverty!I am from the area, and I know plenty of such tragic stories.I have lost so many of my family members almost the same way! It is sad!! Thank you Driss!
Hopefully some thing will come out of this new era under
the vision of his HM MVI.
El younsi
 
elhanan : comme toujour driss a great job from a great person.
it's a sad story too bad we're loosing many of saads in morocco it's something that's happening evryday.all we can say lahh yerhamhom we yghfar lihom.
 
aitbomeron : Salaam Mr Temsamani,

Thanks for such a moving story. It really brought tears to my eyes and reminded me of why we chose to leave that beloved land of "no opportunities" as you called it.
The story is so moving and suspenceful that I couldn't stop reading until I reached the end. it breaks my heart that it's real and that it is the story of not just one character but mny more hopeless people.
Thanks a gain for such an outstanding job expressing a common torment to all wlad our blad.
sincerely,

AITBOMERON.

 
londoncal : it's case of *the grass is always greener on the other side* but we all know different. our government should make it an absolute priority to eradicate this obssessive need to go abroad when some times it can be worse if not fatal, by doing more for the young, creating jobs and opportunities. we all as a nation need to re-educate our children and the young generation to rid itself of this deadly obsssession of emigrating and only then can one be successful. having said that i totally understand why so many of our youngsters do it. despair and hoplessness have a great deal to contribute to this social disease.

thank you for bringing this controversial subject on board.
 
joiebelle : Driss,
I was moved by your story. I know that it is true and it happens everyday. People are struggling to survive and fulfill their basic needs. It is very sad that a life of a teenage ended in a such a tragic way. I hope one day life will brighten the innecent faces and give them hope. Million thanks again.
Fay
 
bettyboop : I was very touched by your story. i'm speechless, the only thing i could say is: alah yerham aljami3.....
 
narjissmouslim : it's a great and sad story.
unfortunately , it's the reality.
all what I can say is " lay yerhemhoum ou ywousse3 3lihoum".
 
amal27 : perfect
 
Wafine13 : Driss,
Thank you for a great story. While it sounds sad, I really see it as a story of courage. Saad's courage is prevalent in most young kids who have the ambition, but lack the opportunity. Nobody should have to die while trying to create an opportunity, but I would rather die like Saad then die slowly by "injection" of misery, poverty and hopelessness...

Keep up the good work!
Regards,
 
ouakil : Nice story, but how did you know about the pain in his leg.

I have no doubt that many Moroccans suffer from poverty and lack of opportunities, however, strapping your self to a fridge that is two time your height just before you go for a long swim is not due to poverty of lack of opportunities, I looks like Saad was not as bright as you made it sound.
We all at some point had or will have to go trough some hardship, but some reason has to be maintained while dealing with the situation for it not to get worst.

It really takes some body special to do what Saad did, but while some people might find this story sad I find it funny, and I don’t know why it starts when Saad was 13.
 
qadour : Allah ya Driss,
teyaate bel 3awama de rincone hta nhad daraga a sahbe!!? wuld e rincone maghade y 3umshi be frigo men castiyekho heta n rincone. hada el houmk mashe "desperation". wuld e rincone ghade shouf frigo wey qul ne Hmida "3oum beh ntina we qul n mhalem dyalek yehshe dollar dyalo fe souw....."
Mouhem, your point is well taken. I am just kidding with you Mr. Driss.
This article should be a reminder to all of us who have managed to break through to the other side to stay humble, and remember why we are here. More importantly, this sort of article should make us all look into the mirror and stare until we see the swimmer in all of us.
Llah ye rham li mat we y 3aoun li flet!
rincone.
 
SALAH : Very touching story , let's hope that things well improve in Morocco so it won't happen any more .
Salah Ghazi
 
dc : To my outmost surprise, I noticed that some commenters tried to question Saad’s sanity.

I would like to propose that “sanity” is luxury that these people can’t afford to have. Furthermore, even under the best of circumstances, one can easily show that people, including everyone of us, are anything but rational beings.

The human behavior is driven by more of what feels good at the moment, coupled, of course, with reason!

Does it matter that the subject character is fictitious or real person? Does that change the fact the hundreds of young Moroccans die every year while attempting an escape from their miserable lives and a country that doesn’t value their existence?

This isn’t about logic or reason. This is about how to rid our country of the forces that drive our young brothers and sisters to commit suicide. This about riding our country from the diseases of corruption, injustice and the like.
 
cmoi : Hello writer,

your story is as well described as it is true. But I would like to comment on the Wafiners'reactions: of course it's sad, and may God bless them. But there is also a REAL world we must cope with. I know many people aware of that tragedy and not trying to work hard for things to change so far. We must WORK, not only talk. Work to give those kids who "did well" the opportunity to fulfill their dreams, by permitting them to get to developped countries and go back there then. They need help, networks. If you're qualified for that, please act!
 
qadour : Dear Mr/Ms. dc,

Your attempt to propose and offer a definition of “sanity” and its interrelationship with rationality at times of crisis is to say the least, debatable. Let’s hear more about your proposals for the later part of your comments (i.e.; the part about riding our country from corruption, injustice, and etc…….).
regards,
qadour.
 
dc : Dear Qadour,

Thanks Qadour for your attention. First of all, I didn’t intend to provide an absolute definition – all is, of course, debatable.

You sought to hear my proposals for riding our country of corruption and what not. Before I try to answer your question, I would like to make a general statement about what my experience has been while interacting/debating these same issues with many of our people. In short, the general consensus among all Moroccans is that we want things to improve back home. However, the majority of these same folks are themselves guilty of handing out bribes and engaging in different forms of injustices – look closely at people’s behavior, especially when it comes that those seemingly small actions. My point is that corruption and injustice aren’t just out there – corruption is no more than some specific act taken by people like you and me, and we its source. Morocco is you and I, and if we are corrupt, so is Morocco. Everyone matters here!

When, we, ourselves, become aware of this fundamental truth and start to operate from a place of corruption is wrong/disgusting/immoral/evil …, then, and only then corruption will cease to exist in our country. My point is, if we want JUST and Corrupt-free Morocco, we ourselves first have to become just and corrupt-free people … etc – it isn’t out there, it is in us and we are it.

To get started, let’s all decide right now that from now on, we will act and speak against corruption, injustice and all their forms …. Etc. This, I think, is the kind of commitment that causes real change. That is my two cents …

This is all I have time for right now. Go to go.

Thanks again.

PS. A saying from childhood: Kollo Inaaine yarshaho bimaa fiihe – a tea pot filled with tea, can only pour tea ...
 
qadour : Dear dc,
Your two cents for me make a dollar. The richness of your comments is not merely in place, but it appears to stem from a very positive and optimistic utopia that we all have a tendency to fall prey to. I can also tell that your careful approach to answering the question, as you stated, comes from many experiences in discussing this very subject. Unfortunately, as you might well be aware , this type of discussions are never ever conclusive and perhaps generate more unresolved issues than usually one starts out with.
In any case, I definitely agree with you on this perspective and I hope that most of our brothers and sisters out there fall into the same frame of mind. I would like to add one more simple thought, which in my opinion perhaps is the most important of all- that is our kids, the next generation. As I am always very optimistic about making the present better, I must admit that in some cases and especially the one we are discussing, the task at hand appears very overwhelming. Nonetheless, if we plant the seed of all the wonderful things that you mentioned in your response in our kids and the kids of our immediate families, their friends, our neighbors and so on and so forth…….., I believe, No, I am certain!! that in the very near future “In-Shaa-Llah” we will see the fruits of our efforts today being enjoyed by the rest of the world.
Thank you for your thought dc.
 
fayza : Thank you Driss for such a tragic intersting story. It is very sad to know that our teens end thinking about their future in their early age and they end up performing crayz things. I hope the reality will change very soon and our land become promising so that our youth will stay in the land and perform a great job. Yet, this seems to me like a dream that may realize in the far future.
Thanks again.
Fayza
 
missmouna : It was very touching. You should publish a book, if you already haven't done so.
Mouna
 
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